看图写话类作文,要求考生根据所给的一组图画,写出一篇故事完整、句子通顺、语意连贯、符合图意的短文。在命题形式上除了图画的提示外,一般还有中英文提示,有的开头已给出。着重考查考生的语言表达能力和想象力。
此类作文往往使用过去时,按照时间顺序叙述。开头开门见山、直入主题。正文注意用词恰当和句子之间的衔接过渡,可适当使用and,then,however,thus等使文章层次分明、语言通顺、意思连贯。结尾应自然有力。
[典例展示]
(2016·高考北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。
注意:词数不少于60。 提示词:地球日 Earth Day
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Actions for a Greener Earth
A week before Earth Day,posters were put up around our school,calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.We brought to our classroom wornout clothes,pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles,and turned those into dolls,
handbags,tissue boxes and small vases.That weekend,we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there.All were very happy with those unexpected gifts,especially little kids and elderly people.We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world. 针对训练
雪后的校园景色分外美丽。李华看到路面很滑,便开始清扫通往教室的道路上的积雪。请根据图画提示写一篇文章,讲述李华扫雪的故事。
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注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
It was a cold winter day. The campus looked very beautiful with snow covering the ground. Li Hua, who came to school early before class began, finished cleaning the classroom and stood by the window. The scenery was so beautiful that he decided to go out to take pictures.
When he was walking along the road outside the classroom, he saw another student walking in front of him. The road was so slippery that he suddenly fell down. Seeing this, Li Hua went back to the classroom and took the broom out. It took him about 10 minutes to clear away the snow that covered the road to the classroom.
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Thanks to his hard work, the teachers and students could walk on the road safely. They thought highly of what Li Hua had done.
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