书面表达训练学案之三 书信(信 文娱与课外生活)

二轮复习书面表达训练学案之三 书信（信+文娱与课外生活）

范文学习 假定你是李华，你要完成一项关于中英学生寒假生活的调查。请给你的英国笔友Bill写一封信，交流相关信息。要点如下：Dear Bill, 1. 写信的原因； How is everything? 2. 介绍中国学生的寒假生活； I’ m doing a project on how British and Chinese students spend their winter 1) 时长：约20天 holidays. In China, the winter vacation is usually about twenty days long. It falls 2）活动 during the Chinese New Year, so most students take part in different Spring 3. 询问英国学生的寒假生活。 Festival activities, such as visiting family, eating lots of foods, and most importantly, getting lucky money! During the holiday many students will also go 注意： 1. 词数100左右; travelling with their parents. Unfortunately they can’t travel for long though 2.可适当增加细节。 because Chinese students always have a lot of homework to do during this break. Many must even attend special holiday classes. What about in the UK? How do the students spend the winter holidays there? I’m looking forward to your reply. 范文抄写：

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Yours Li Hua

句型提示：

1、书信功能句： 2、英语作文万能句：

1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的)

2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语）

3) I would appreciate it if you could … 如果你能…，我将非常感激。 4) I wonder if you could … 我想您是否能….

5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。。。？ 6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…? 7) I would like to … 我想要…

8) It would be better for you to … 您最好… 9) You might as well … 您最好…

10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会… 11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您… 3、英语作文常用句式：

1) 主+谓+…,doing/done … 2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句 3）主，同位语，+谓+… 4）主+谓+…,with 结构

5）What +从句 is that 从句

6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用）

7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等 作文仿写 2

写作训练（3）

暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

待在家中 外出旅游 优 点 花费少、舒适方便 增长知识、开阔眼界 缺 点 不能亲身了解外界 花费多、旅途不便 注意：1．短文写在答题卡上的指定区域，词数80—120（不含已写好部分）。

2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述。 3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4．参考词汇：眼界—horizon（或view）

注意;

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。

思路点拨：1、人称：第三人称为主；时态：一般现在时；2、要点：1）讨论的主题；2）同学

的看法；3）你的看法；

参考句型：1. Some students are in favour of … for the reason that …; 2. Others prefer to do ..., thinking that …; 3. In my opinion, …

第一稿

The summer holiday is coming.

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第二稿

The summer holiday is coming.

第三稿

The summer holiday is coming.

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参考范文

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home .They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more ,they can save money for other purposes .But they will lose the chance of getting to know that outside world.

However ,others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge

and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties , while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home ,for I can do what I like ,such

as reading books ,watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

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