中考英语-写作之命题作文(含解析)-专项练习

一、写作题

1.Write at least 60 words with the topic “The most unforgettable experience”. 请你以“最难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：在每个人的成长过程中，肯定都有令人难忘的经历，给人带来深刻的印象，对人的成长具有重要的作用。请你就其中的一件最难忘的事进行描述，与大家分享。 要求：内容切题、语句通顺、意思连贯、字迹清楚。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） unforgettable experiences, the most unforgettable, Why is it …?

2.以\"Good table manners\"为题，写一个报告，目的号召同学们养成良好的餐饮习惯，如直到大家都到了再开始用餐；吃东西时不能张着嘴或者说话等等，字数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入词数。Good table manners

We are going to hold a talk on good table manner. The purpose of the talk is to teach students________

3.Should students do chores at home?不同的家长和同学可能有不同的看法，请你就这一话题先发表自己的观点，然后说出至少三条理南支持你的观点。同数：60左右。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Should students do chores at home?

Should students do chores at home'? Different people may answer this question differently. I think students……do chores at home.……

4.假如你是Lily，上周六你和你的朋友Rose参观蝴蝶馆。请你写一篇题为\"A Trip to the Butterfly House\"的英语短文，为你下周在英语角上的发言做准备。 要求：不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Trip to the Butterfly House

Hey，I'm Lily．

5.寒假将要来临，为了度过一个充实而有意义的寒假，Mary想在班会上发言，告诉同学们她自己的寒假计划，请你按照下面表格内的要点，以Mary的身份写一篇发言稿。 注：1）文章要包括表格内所有的信息；

2）可适当发挥但不得出现真实的个人信息（人名、地名、学校名等）； 3）词数80左右（开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。 School work 每天早读15分钟，提高自己的阅读和写作水平。 每天写作业30分钟，认真完成老师布置的作业。 Sports Housework Trip 每天做运动，保持身体健康。 帮助妈妈干家务，如洗衣、拖地、倒垃圾等。 和父母到海南旅游一周，参观博物馆、到海滩上玩耍。 Winter vacation is coming. Here are my plans.

6.以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇短文介绍一下你的英语老师,内容包括他或她的年龄,外貌和爱好等。

要求：句子通顺,描写合理,层次清楚。60词左右。 My English Teacher

7.三年的初中生涯, 你和同学们一起经历了很多事, 留下了难忘的回忆。某英语报正以\"I remember\"为主题, 举办毕业生征文活动。请根据下图提示和要求, 写一篇英语短文描述你们一起做的一件事, 并表达你的感受。

要求:①文章应包括以上要点, 可适当发挥;②文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;③词数:80—100字。

8.人人都有自己最喜爱的食物，请以”My Favorite Food” 为题写一篇80个单词左右的作文，谈谈你最喜爱的食物及其制作过程。

9.请以\"My family\"为题写一篇短文。（50词左右）

10. 假如你是卢红, 你的英国笔友Lisa想了解你的饮食情况。请你根据下面的提示内容, 给Lisa写一封50词左右的电子邮件。电子邮件的格式已给出, 不计入总词数。 提示内容：

1). 你最喜欢的食物和饮料； 2). 它们是否有利于健康。 Dear Lisa, Yours. LuHong

11.为了使教学相长，你所在的学校英语社团正在开展主题为\"What should a good English teacher be like?\"的讨论。请根据如下提示，并结合你白己的观点，用英语写一篇短文发表在社团刊物上。

注意：①短文须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；②你的观点至少两条：③词数：80～100；④短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文首句：These days we are talking about what a good English teacher be like． 12.围绕\"生活的变化\"这个话题，李华所在的英语社团对其成员进行了一次调查。下面是李华填写的调查表，请你根据表格内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍李华生活的变化。 In the past liked fast food Now likes healthy food didn't like sports took a bus to school often ill likes sports walks to school in excellent condition 13. 假如你是你班运动达人，今天你在某运动论坛中认识了同样热爱运动的外国网友Oliver。在聊天中他对你喜欢的球类运动很好奇，请你根据自身情况写一篇50词左右的短文，向他介绍你所拥有的球类数目及喜好。

14.假如你是李华，你美国的朋友Tom 在寒假打算学习中文。请你根据他提出的问题给出一些学习建议。要求，50个词左右。

提示词语：practice, listen, speak, China, computer, easily

Dear Tom,

I am glad that you want to study Chinese. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua

15.假如你是九年级一班的李新，你们的新外教Peter想去北京参观故宫博物院，希望你能给他作一个大概的介绍。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他发一封电子邮件。 要点内容：

1)紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……； 建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）

2)游客情况及地位(1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……) 3)希望他尽快成行。

写作要求：80词左右；条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。 Dear Peter, I'm Li Xin. …… Yours, Li Xin

16.初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给

大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事，短文应包括事情的起因、经过和结局以及事后你的感想。(15分) 要求：

1).词数不少于80词； 2).条理清晰、语句通顺；

3).不得出现真实的人名或校名。

17.寒假即将来临，你有什么安排呢?请根据提示以“My winter holiday”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的寒假计划。

提示：1．坚持做运动；2．读书，看电视；3．帮助父母做家务；4．去观光旅游 My winter holiday

The winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it.

18.为促进全民阅读，某校对全体同学的课外阅读情况做了问卷调查。请根据下列调查数据和相关文字提示，以\"Let's read more!\"为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明课外阅读的现状和意义，并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的观点。 要点 阅读的现状 内容 1）只有36%的学生经常读书 2）58%的学生很少读书 3）6%的学生从不读书 不重视阅读的原因 1）对阅读不感兴趣 2）花在看电视或上网上的时间太多 3）作业太多 你的观点 （至少两点） 要求：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不记入总词数； 2. 内容必须包括表中的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯，通畅； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。

词汇: 36%的学生 36 % of the students Let's read more!

Our school has done a survey among the students and find that……

19. 假如你是何丽, 本周你们班英语口语课的主题是My family。请你根据下面表格所提供的信息, 在课上作家庭介绍。不少于五句话。 爸爸何宾 英语老师 妈妈赵圆 语文老师 弟弟何飞 学生 Hello, everyone! Thank you.

20.校园生活丰富多彩，每天我们都参加各种活动，增长知识的同时还可以锻炼身体。 请以“My School Life”为题，讲述你的校园生活。

要求：语法规范，语句连贯。60个词左右。 My School Life

21.我们每天都在宽敞明亮的教室里学习，请以My Classroom为题，向朋友们介绍一下你自己的教室，不少于50词。

参考词汇：big (大的); tidy(整洁的); wall(墙) 22.书面表达

三年的初中生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激。假如你叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福。 注意：①格式要完整、正确；

②可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息； ③词数：80～100，短文首句不计入总词数。 Dear father and mother, I'm glad to write to you. ________

23.十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：

品质 善良，善待动物，勤劳…… 爱好 …… 事迹 组织慈善义演，为Save China's Tigers筹款…… 感悟 动物是人类的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己 打算 …… 要求：⑴词数不少于80。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ⑵所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。 I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello，everyone．I'm Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. Thanks for listening!

24.用英语写一篇60字左右的短文: My family

25.每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多 原因。请以“What makes me a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。

What Makes Me a Good Friend?

26.某英文杂志正在进行My space hero的征文活动，假如你是该杂志的热心读者，你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。请你根据下面有关景海鹏的资料写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，参加征文活动开头己给出，不计入总词数)。 1)．1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；

2)．2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务： 3)．2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；

4)．2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。 My space hero

My space hero is JingHaipeng……

27.根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文。（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点: 过去 1).旧房 2).河水肮脏 3).步行、骑自行车上班 4).道路狭窄(narrow). 5).居住条件（living conditions）差 现在 1).高楼 2).河水清澈(clean and clear). 3).乘公交车、小汽车上班 4).街道宽阔(wide)，干净整洁 5).生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适。 你的感想 ……（写两到三句） Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.……

28.下表是希望工程在2006年西部某一省区所取得的成就。请你根据表中所给的信息写一篇题为“Project Hope”的短文，字数在50—60字左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入词数。要求行文连贯、通顺、正确，语言表达清楚。 What Project Hope has done in a province in 2006 Money Project Hope has raised Students it has helped Schools it has built Books it has bought Clothes it has given People who have taken part Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money —28,593,346 yuan.

28,593,346 yuan 5036 62 3,452,141 5,000 367,403 答案解析部分

一、写作题

1.Write at least 60 words with the topic “The most unforgettable experience”. 请你以“最难忘的经历”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

提示：在每个人的成长过程中，肯定都有令人难忘的经历，给人带来深刻的印象，对人的成长具有重要的作用。请你就其中的一件最难忘的事进行描述，与大家分享。 要求：内容切题、语句通顺、意思连贯、字迹清楚。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） unforgettable experiences, the most unforgettable, Why is it …?

【答案】 The most unforgettable experience

I have the most unforgettable experience.One day,I argued with my friends. They hold the view that fast food is tasty and eating fast food can save plenty of time so that they can keep up with the pace of the time. In addition, they consider it a symbol of fashion.

However, some young people are against eating fast food, because it's rich in fat and can make them gain weight. Besides, businessmen sell fast food with the purpose of making money. What's worse, the majority of the fast food isn't healthy, which does harm to the young generation's health.

In my point of view, it's a waste of money eating fast food. We ought to eat as little fast food as possible. The major principle of a diet is eating environmentally friendly food. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇话题作文。根据题目可知，本文主要用一般过去时，人称是第一人称。首先作者说出我有一次最难忘的经历是一天和朋友们争论。争论的话题是关于快餐。然后作者介绍了朋友们就快餐的看法：他们认为快餐不但美味而且介绍很多的时间让他们可以跟上时代的步伐，他们认为是一种时尚。紧接着作者在第二段中介绍了一些年轻人反对吃快餐因为它富含脂肪并使他们体重增加，生意人卖快餐的目的是为了赚钱，大多数的快餐都不健康它会损害年轻一代的健康。作者最后说出了自己的观点：吃快餐是浪费金钱，我们应该尽可能的少吃快餐，饮食的主要原则是吃环保食品。这篇短文句式应用较多。例如However, some young people are against eating fast food, because it's rich in fat and can make them gain weight. Besides, businessmen sell fast food with the purpose of making money.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

【点评】话题作文，提供的内容少，要靠自己组织内容，难度较大。在写作时要注意谋篇布局，同时也要注意使用高级词汇与连词，使文章更地道流畅。

2.以\"Good table manners\"为题，写一个报告，目的号召同学们养成良好的餐饮习惯，如直到大家都到了再开始用餐；吃东西时不能张着嘴或者说话等等，字数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入词数。Good table manners

We are going to hold a talk on good table manner. The purpose of the talk is to teach students________

【答案】暂未更新 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】养成良好的习惯可以用短语have a good habit；直到可以用until引导的句型。吃饭时不能张着嘴或者说话可以用祈使句的否定句，即Don`t +动词原形。第一段介绍一下餐桌礼仪，第二段具体写餐桌礼仪体现在哪些方面。第三段鼓励大家注重餐桌礼仪，对餐桌礼仪发表自己的意见。

【点评】书写英语作文时，首先，应当理解题意；其次，应善于谋篇布局，而不是生硬得翻译，适当低加一些美化句型或者短语，这样比较新颖。构思清楚，提纲作文，必须首先完成提纲中所列出来的内容，然后加一些常见的句型，这样更完美一些。

3.Should students do chores at home?不同的家长和同学可能有不同的看法，请你就这一话题先发表自己的观点，然后说出至少三条理南支持你的观点。同数：60左右。文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Should students do chores at home?

Should students do chores at home'? Different people may answer this question differently. I think students……do chores at home.……

【答案】 Should students do chores at home?

Should students do chores at home? Different people may answer this question differently. I think students should do chores at home. Here are my reasons.

Firstly, doing some chores can make you independent. You can't depend on others all your life. So, you should learn to do some chores now. Secondly, doing some chores com keep you healthy and strong. Some hard chores can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Finally, doing some housework can make you share your parents' work. They must be happy if you say \"Have a rest, and I will do the housework. \"

So I think it is good for students to do some chores. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇议论文写作，根据所给命题 Should students do chores at home？发表自己的观点，并至少说出三条理由来支持自己的观点。写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理，表述的条理性和准确性。在表达自己的观点时，可以使用 Firstly，Secondly，Finally等词。最后进一步阐明自己的观点 So I think it is good for students to do some chores.

【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。

4.假如你是Lily，上周六你和你的朋友Rose参观蝴蝶馆。请你写一篇题为\"A Trip to the Butterfly House\"的英语短文，为你下周在英语角上的发言做准备。 要求：不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Trip to the Butterfly House

Hey，I'm Lily． 【答案】One possible version： A Trip to the Butterfly House

Hey，I'm Lily. Last Saturday I visited the Butterfly House with my friend Rose. There we saw

many kinds of butterflies, They came from different countries and they were all very

beautiful .We took quite a lot of photos of them. The guide told us some stories about butterflies. They were very interesting. We learned a lot about butterflies and really had a good time in the Butterfly House. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，以 A Trip to the Butterfly House 为题，用 Lily 的语气来写上周六和朋友 Rose 参观蝴蝶馆的经历。因为所给时间是“上周六”，表示过去，故文章需要用一般过去时，注意所用动词的过去式的正确拼写，例如 visited，saw，came，took，told，learned，had 等等。

【点评】在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。

5.寒假将要来临，为了度过一个充实而有意义的寒假，Mary想在班会上发言，告诉同学们她自己的寒假计划，请你按照下面表格内的要点，以Mary的身份写一篇发言稿。 注：1）文章要包括表格内所有的信息；

2）可适当发挥但不得出现真实的个人信息（人名、地名、学校名等）； 3）词数80左右（开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。 School work 每天早读15分钟，提高自己的阅读和写作水平。 每天写作业30分钟，认真完成老师布置的作业。 Sports Housework Trip 每天做运动，保持身体健康。 帮助妈妈干家务，如洗衣、拖地、倒垃圾等。 和父母到海南旅游一周，参观博物馆、到海滩上玩耍。 Winter vacation is coming. Here are my plans. 【答案】 Winter vacation is coming. Here are my plans.

First， I need some time to do my homework. Every day，I need 15 minutes' morning reading to improve my reading and writing skills. I am going to spend 30 minutes doing my homework. Second，doing sports every day is necessary for me， because I want to stay in good health. Third， I want to help my mom with the housework， such as doing the laundry， mopping the floor and taking the trash. Last I will visit Hainan with my parents. We will stay there for a week. We are going to visit the museum. We also want to go to the beach and have fun together. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本题是一篇发言稿，要注意语言的准确、精炼。本发言稿的主要内容是谈谈假期的计划，短文用一般将来时态，第一人称。根据表格提示，本计划要从学业方面、体育运动方面、家务劳动方面及旅行方面进行写作。要包含所有这些要点，并适当地发挥。要注意句型结构的选择，语言表达要符合英语习惯。

【点评】这篇作文详细、全面地阐明了自己的寒假计划，并包含了要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语的准确使用，为文章增色不少。如: I need 15 minutes' morning

reading to improve my reading and writing skills. 利用动词不定式使文章简洁明了。 6.以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇短文介绍一下你的英语老师,内容包括他或她的年龄,外貌和爱好等。

要求：句子通顺,描写合理,层次清楚。60词左右。 My English Teacher

【答案】 My English Teacher Miss Zhang is my English teacher. Her name is Zhang Jing. She is thirty years old. She is of medium height with long black hair. She always wears glasses. She likes telling stories and she is friendly to us. Her classes are very interesting, so we have much fun learning English. Miss Zhang likes sports. She often plays basketball with us after class. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇人物介绍文章。介绍人物的姓名、年龄和身材及他的性格爱好，及他对学生的态度。

【点评】这是一篇简单的人物介绍，介绍时主语用第三人称单数，句子时态用一般现在时，用一些固定句式结构和常用的短语，例如She is of medium height. tell stories, be friendly to sb. have run doing sth. play basketball with sb.等。在写作中不要出现语法错误和拼写错误。 7.三年的初中生涯, 你和同学们一起经历了很多事, 留下了难忘的回忆。某英语报正以\"I remember\"为主题, 举办毕业生征文活动。请根据下图提示和要求, 写一篇英语短文描述你们一起做的一件事, 并表达你的感受。

要求:①文章应包括以上要点, 可适当发挥;②文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;③词数:80—100字。

【答案】 I Remember

Time flies. Our junior middle schol is ending. There are too many memories which are difficult to forget. I remember last term before the final examination，all of us studied hard. One day, Tom fell ill and couldn't go to school. He was very anxious because the exam was coming. We then decided to go to his house to tell him the homework , what we learnt during the daytime and deal with the difficulties we learnt in class. Tom was very happy. Although we were tired, we felt happy and worthwhile. At last, in the final exam, Tom got high scores and our teachers praised us for what we had done. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】首先认真审题，了解要写的内容是毕业生征文，认真阅读题目要求，要包括图中包括的情况。语句要通顺，行文要连贯，时态以一般过去时为主，发挥要适当，能利用所学的知识，使文章更加精彩。

【点评】这篇作文语句通顺、行文连贯，要点齐全，时态使用正确，字数适当。作文中利用了很多好句子，例如：There are too many memories which are difficult to forget. Although we were tired, we felt happy and worthwhile. Tom got high scores and our teachers praised us for what we had done. 使文章增色不少。

8.人人都有自己最喜爱的食物，请以”My Favorite Food” 为题写一篇80个单词左右的作文，谈谈你最喜爱的食物及其制作过程。 【答案】One possible version：My Favorite Food

I like different kinds of food. But my favorite food is mooncakes. I like them very much. They are very delicious and popular.

Mooncakes are delicious round cakes. Some have eggs or nuts in them ,and some have meat. People usually buy them in a food shop. They look like the moon, so we call them mooncakes. Mooncakes are round and it means family members' getting together. Mooncakes have many delicious materials. It means harvest. On the Mid-autumn Day Chinese people like having mooncakes. At night, we often stay in the open air. We look at the moon, eat mooncakes and talk about happy things. We always have a good time. I like mooncakes best. Do you like mooncakes, too? 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本题要求以“My Favorite Food”为题作文，写出最喜欢的食物及其制作过程。短文从两个方面进行写作，一是介绍自己最喜欢的食物；二是介绍这种食物的制作过程。短文用一般现在时态进行表达。要注意句型的选择及应用。

【点评】本范文第一段开门见山：我最喜欢的食物是月饼。第二段先对月饼作了一些基本的介绍；然后说出了月饼在中国文化中的含义：丰收、团圆；最后讲述月饼与中秋，进一步升华了月饼的含义及我喜欢月饼的理由。短文最后简短结尾，首尾呼应，主题突出。 9.请以\"My family\"为题写一篇短文。（50词左右）

【答案】 My family My family is a big family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my father and my mother. Because my grandparents are old, they stay at home all day. My parents go to work at workdays. My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse. I love them very much. I am the only child in my family. They like me too. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】话题作文。这篇作文要求我们以\"My family\"为题写一篇短文，包括家庭成员，职业，关系等等。应使用一般现在时态，在文中运用并列句My father is a teacher, and my mother is a nurse.和原因状语从句Because my grandparents are old, they stay at home all day等句型，会为文章增色不少。

【点评】写作时，我们首先需要考虑该介绍哪些信息并整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且这些关于介绍人物及家庭时所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以，尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。 10. 假如你是卢红, 你的英国笔友Lisa想了解你的饮食情况。请你根据下面的提示内容, 给Lisa写一封50词左右的电子邮件。电子邮件的格式已给出, 不计入总词数。 提示内容：

1). 你最喜欢的食物和饮料； 2). 它们是否有利于健康。 Dear Lisa, Yours. LuHong

【答案】One possible version： Dear Lisa:

My favourite food is noodles with carrots. Carrots are good for my eyes. My favourite drink is milk. It's good for my teeth. I drink cola too, but it's bad for me. I like beef too, but I don't eat too much. What about you? Yours， Lu Hong

【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】首先审题，了解要写的内容，写作过程中要包括提示的要点，然后用所学知识组织语言，例如：我最喜爱的食物/饮料是my favourite food/drink is ···，对······有好处be good for···健康：health, 要使语句通顺，行文连贯。

【点评】这篇作文根据提示要点写出了自己的饮食情况，语句通顺，行文连贯，重点突出，是一篇好作文。

11.为了使教学相长，你所在的学校英语社团正在开展主题为\"What should a good English teacher be like?\"的讨论。请根据如下提示，并结合你白己的观点，用英语写一篇短文发表在社团刊物上。

注意：①短文须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；②你的观点至少两条：③词数：80～100；④短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文首句：These days we are talking about what a good English teacher be like． 【答案】 These days we are talking about what a good English teacher should be like. Most students think the teacher should pronounce clearly but talk less in class, so that we will have more time to practice with each other．Besides, it's very important for him/her to make classes more lively and interesting．What's more, the teacher must be quite patient with us and be always pleased to help us improve our English.

From my point of view, a good English teacher should be our close friend at school．Not only is the teacher strict with us, but also he cares us．Also, I hope a good English teacher had better behave and dress properly． 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇评论型议论文写作，议论文又叫说理文，是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非，以确定其观点正确或错误，树立或否定某种主张。本文要求按照所给的题目结合提示内容完成这篇关于英语老师应该是怎样的文章。写作中要包含现象的引出，表达大部分人的观点是如何，以及为什么会有这样的观点，再表明自己个人的观点以及理由进行陈述等等。根据材料可知本文的时态是一般现在时，人称主要是复数人称，注意单复数的形式，并列连词以及主谓一致。写作时

要注意上下文过渡时要符合逻辑。

【点评】这篇短文详细，全面地阐述了英语老师应该是怎样的观点和看法。并包含了题目中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，宾语从句以及倒装句的使用也为文章增色不少。如so that，besides，It is very important for sb to do sth，make sb/sth+adj.,what's more，not only……but also等等。最后一段用到的倒装句也是可圈可点的，如Not only is the teacher strict with us, but also he cares us．学习中注意总结并牢记一些固定句式和短语，写作时可以适当地引用，使文章表达的更有逻辑，更有条理性，也更加出彩。

12.围绕\"生活的变化\"这个话题，李华所在的英语社团对其成员进行了一次调查。下面是李华填写的调查表，请你根据表格内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍李华生活的变化。 In the past liked fast food didn't like sports took a bus to school often ill Now likes healthy food likes sports walks to school in excellent condition 【答案】One possible version：

Li Hua's life has changed a lot．In the past he liked fast food，such as hamburgers and sandwiches．He didn't like sports and never exercised．He usually took a bus to school．Because of these，he often got ill．

Now things are different．Li Hua likes eating healthy food，such as fruit and vegetables．He likes sports and often takes exercise．To get more exercise，he walks to school every day．With healthy food and enough exercise, now, Li Hua is in excellent condition. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本题属于题干类作文，主要应该叙述对英语社团成员的调查，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定所用时态，语言表达要符合英语中的习惯。 一、阅读提示，弄清题目信息，明确写作要点。 1.每个成员过去的爱好 2.每个成员现在的爱好

二、根据要点，写出关键词，短语或句子。 三、组词成句，连词成篇。注意使用一般现在时。

【点评】本题考查学生写作的能力，应熟练使用相关短语，对题干正确理解，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。

13. 假如你是你班运动达人，今天你在某运动论坛中认识了同样热爱运动的外国网友Oliver。在聊天中他对你喜欢的球类运动很好奇，请你根据自身情况写一篇50词左右的短文，向他介绍你所拥有的球类数目及喜好。 【答案】One possible version:

Hello, Oliver．I have a basketball and two ping-pong bats．I like basketball so much, and it's easy for me, I always play it with my brother Roy． He likes volleyball very much．I like volleyball too，but I can't play it well, I think it's very difficult．What about you?

【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性作文，首先细读题目要求，然后找出写作的重点。要根据自身情况介绍自己拥有的球类数目和爱好。利用句式: I have ···我有······。I like··· 我喜欢······。时态要用一般现在时。

【点评】这篇作文言简意赅，包含了要求的要点，行文连贯，语句流畅，适当的发挥引出I like volleyball too，but I can't play it well, I think it's very difficult. 是文章更加精彩。

14.假如你是李华，你美国的朋友Tom 在寒假打算学习中文。请你根据他提出的问题给出一些学习建议。要求，50个词左右。

提示词语：practice, listen, speak, China, computer, easily

Dear Tom,

I am glad that you want to study Chinese. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom,

I am glad that you want to study Chinese. I think Chinese is more difficult to learn than English. But I have some advice on language learning for vou. If you couldn't find nartive speakers around you，there are some great computer programs that will help you learn to speak and listen to Chinese. It is very important to listen and practice speaking for language learner. Why don't you come to China during your winter holiday? 1 think there are some very good tourist guide books you can carry around with you. I believe that it will help you learn Chinese quickly and easily.

I hope this helps you and see you next time in Beijing. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua

【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较简略，我们要做的就是用正确的

英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点评】给材料作文，仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯 。

15.假如你是九年级一班的李新，你们的新外教Peter想去北京参观故宫博物院，希望你能给他作一个大概的介绍。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他发一封电子邮件。 要点内容：

1)紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……； 建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）

2)游客情况及地位(1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……) 3)希望他尽快成行。

写作要求：80词左右；条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。 Dear Peter, I'm Li Xin. …… Yours, Li Xin

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm Li Xin, a student in Class one, Grade nine. I hear that you want to visit the Palace Museum and now let me introduce it to you. The Palace Museum, which is also called the Forbidden City, was built for the Emperor's bedroom during 1406 and 1420. It is one of the most famous tourist resorts in Beijing. The Palace Museum lies in Beijing centre. In 1987, it was chosen the largest ancient palace in the world by UNESCO World Heritage. Every year millions of tourists come to Beijing for a visit to the Palace Museum.

I hope you can pay a visit to it as soon as possible. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】首先认真审题，了解要写的内容是介绍北京故宫博物馆的基本情况，认真阅读题目要求用英语写一封电子邮件，要包括所有要点，语句要通顺，行文要连贯，时态要运用适当，发挥要适当，能利用所学的知识，使文章更加精彩。

【点评】这篇作文行文连贯，语句通顺、条理清楚，包括了所有要点，作文中定语从句The Palace Museum, which is also called the Forbidden City, was built for the Emperor's bedroom during 1406 and 1420. ，最高级的句型It is one of the most famous tourist resorts in Beijing. 和 In 1987, it was chosen the largest ancient palace in the world by UNESCO World Heritage. 的使用，使作文更加精彩。

16.初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事，短文应包括事情的起因、经过和结局以及事后你的感想。(15分) 要求：

1).词数不少于80词； 2).条理清晰、语句通顺；

3).不得出现真实的人名或校名。

【答案】 How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇话题作文，要求根据提示要点写一篇关于中学生活的文章。人称为第一人称。注意时态的变化，讲述过去的事情用一般过去时；讲述现在的事情用一般现在时；展望未来用一般将来时。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：运用了让步状语从句：No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up.运用了时间状语从句：As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. 等等。

17.寒假即将来临，你有什么安排呢?请根据提示以“My winter holiday”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的寒假计划。

提示：1．坚持做运动；2．读书，看电视；3．帮助父母做家务；4．去观光旅游 My winter holiday

The winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it.

【答案】 My winter holiday

The winter holiday is coming. Here are my plans for it. First, I will keep playing sports.Second ,I am going to spend more time in reading and watching TV so that I can get good grades next term.Third, I'm going to help my parents do housework. At last,I am planning to travel somewhere interesting.

I am sure I will have a wonderful vacation. I can't wait. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时，主语是第一人称，写作中注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。同时适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点评】 提纲作文主要考查学生语言综合运用能力, 为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要多读，多背，就能出口成章，下笔成文。还

要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法。

18.为促进全民阅读，某校对全体同学的课外阅读情况做了问卷调查。请根据下列调查数据和相关文字提示，以\"Let's read more!\"为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明课外阅读的现状和意义，并就中学生如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出你的观点。 要点 阅读的现状 内容 1）只有36%的学生经常读书 2）58%的学生很少读书 3）6%的学生从不读书 不重视阅读的原因 1）对阅读不感兴趣 2）花在看电视或上网上的时间太多 3）作业太多 你的观点 （至少两点） 要求：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不记入总词数； 2. 内容必须包括表中的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯，通畅； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。

词汇: 36%的学生 36 % of the students Let's read more!

Our school has done a survey among the students and find that…… 【答案】暂未更新 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本题属于题干类作文，主要应该叙述学校全体同学的课外阅读情况，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定所用时态，语言表达要符合英语中的习惯。 一、阅读提示，弄清题目信息，明确写作要点。

1.阅读的现状：只有36%的学生经常读书；58%的学生很少读书；6%的学生从不读书 2.不重视阅读的原因：对阅读不感兴趣；花在看电视或上网上的时间太多；作业太多 3.你的观点

二、根据要点，写出关键词，短语或句子。 三、组词成句，连词成篇。注意使用一般现在时。

【点评】本题考查学生写作的能力，应熟练使用相关短语，对题干正确理解，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。

19. 假如你是何丽, 本周你们班英语口语课的主题是My family。请你根据下面表格所提供的信息, 在课上作家庭介绍。不少于五句话。 爸爸何宾 英语老师 妈妈赵圆 语文老师 弟弟何飞 学生 Hello, everyone! Thank you.

【答案】One possible version： Hello, everyone!

My name is He Li. My father's name is He Bin. He is an English teacher. My mother's name is Zhao Yuan. She is a Chinese teacher. He Fei is my brother and he is a student. Thank you

【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这篇作文要求何丽在课上作家庭介绍，不少于五句话。要介绍自己以及父母和弟弟。以及他们的身份.

【点评】考查写作能力，根据要求写了my family的成员和身份，语句通顺，是一篇好作文。 20.校园生活丰富多彩，每天我们都参加各种活动，增长知识的同时还可以锻炼身体。 请以“My School Life”为题，讲述你的校园生活。 要求：语法规范，语句连贯。60个词左右。 My School Life

【答案】One possible version：My school Life

My school life is interesting. Let me tell you something about it. In the morning， we have five classes，for example，math.Math is my favourite subject. Although it's very difficult， I love it very much! After the class， we always play games on the playground.We usually play outdoor activities，such as basketball，football and volleyball.I like basketball best! I play it in the school team. In the evening， we sometimes go on a movie or listen to a concert. Because it can make me enjoy myself. This is my school life. I love it! 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这篇短文主要是是介绍了校园生活丰富多彩，我们应该每天锻炼，这样不仅能增长知识还可以锻炼身体。注意人称用一般现在时。

【点评】本文提到很多不错的短语如 tell sb about sth表示告诉某人某事；play games on the playground在操场上做游戏。这些重点句子Although it's very difficult，I love it very much；it can make me enjoy myself。给文章增色不少。

21.我们每天都在宽敞明亮的教室里学习，请以My Classroom为题，向朋友们介绍一下你自己的教室，不少于50词。

参考词汇：big (大的); tidy(整洁的); wall(墙) 【答案】My Classroom

This is my classroom. Some chairs and desks are in the classroom①. A bookcase is in the classroom, too. Some books are in the bookcase①. A map is on the wall①. My schoolbag is on my desk①. What's that? It's my teacher's desk.② An English dictionary is on the teacher's desk①. Where's the baseball? Oh, it's under the desk①.② My classroom is big and tidy. I like my classroom.③ 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本文运用了“三步三层法”来介绍教室物品的摆放：第一步确定介绍的对象(第1句)；第二步谈论物品位置(第2至11句)；第三步对描述对象的所感所思(第12、13句)。从文章结构来看，第一层开篇点题(第1句)；第二层介绍物品位置(第2至11句)；第三层收

尾(第12、13句)。

【点评】本文的添彩点：①本文非常清楚地介绍了自己的教室，正确使用了表示地点的介词短语：in the classroom(在教室里)，in the bookcase(在书柜里)，on the wall(在墙上)，on my desk(在我的书桌上)，on the teacher's desk(在讲桌上)，under the desk(在书桌的下面)。②第7、8句和第10、11句是设问句，引起悬念，使文章显得生动、活泼。③最后一句话表达了作者对自己教室的热爱，使文章结构更加完整。 22.书面表达

三年的初中生活即将结束，你的父母亲一路艰辛，在学习和生活上给予你关怀、鼓励、支持与帮助，你心存感激。假如你叫谢恩，请你给你的父母亲写一封感谢信，谈谈你对他们的印象，回忆他们是怎么帮助你的，并表达你对他们的祝福。 注意：①格式要完整、正确；

②可以根据情节需要适当发挥；文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息； ③词数：80～100，短文首句不计入总词数。 Dear father and mother, I'm glad to write to you. ________

【答案】Dear father and mother, I’m glad to write to you.

You are such kind and responsible parents that I love you very much. Owing to your help, I finished my primary study three years ago, now I will finish my junior middle school. I remember when I was I primary schoo, I hated going to school, and I even made much trouble at school. When you noticed this, you had a talk with me. You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up. I’ve made great progress in my study step by step and now I’m the top student in junior three.

I want to say thanks. I will work harder and be a useful person in the future. I hope you can be happy and healthy forever. Yours, Xie En 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本文是一篇给定话题的书面表达，写作题材为信件，话题为感谢父母，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的要点确定句子的时态，语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 写作步骤：

一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。

1.你对父母的印象。You are such kind and responsible parents。

2.回忆父母是怎么帮助你的。You told me again and again the importance of the study and encouraged me never give up。

3.表达你对他们的祝福。 I hope you can be happy and healthy forever。 二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。

三、组词成句，连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。

【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。

23.十月四日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals”为题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：

品质 善良，善待动物，勤劳…… 爱好 …… 事迹 组织慈善义演，为Save China's Tigers筹款…… 感悟 动物是人类的朋友，保护动物就是保护我们自己 打算 …… 要求：⑴词数不少于80。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ⑵所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。 I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals

Hello，everyone．I'm Li Ming．I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. Thanks for listening!

【答案】 I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals Hello,everyone.I'm Li Ming.I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals.

I'm glad to make a speech here.I am kind to others.I am good with animals.I like playing football and the guitar.I have ever organized activities raising money for Save China's Tigers.And I keep some homeless little animals. Animals are our friends. We should love them.I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. If I can be a volunteer. l will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.I will call on more people to love animals like me.I must try my best to make the world more beautiful. Thanks for listening! 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文。文章的标题作者已经给出。写作要点；要求写出一篇演讲稿。要从品质、爱好、事迹、感悟、打算等几方面写一下想成为保护动物的志愿者。有文章要求可知，文章要用第一人称，要用一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时可适当利用连接词，使文章的符合逻辑，上下文通顺。和可利用一些学生平时使用的短语。和常用句型，为文章增色。

【点评】这篇文章的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to do，be good with，like doing，play football and the guitar，want to be a volunteer，call on，try my best，Thanks for listening等。而I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. / If I can be a volunteer. I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals.等多种从句的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。是一篇好文章。 24.用英语写一篇60字左右的短文: My family

【答案】 My family

I have a big family. There are four people in my family: my mother, my father, my younger brother and me. Oh, there is also a dog named Buddy lives with us. My mother is a Chinese teacher, and my father is a lawyer. My little brother and I go to the same school. On weekday, my father sends us to school; while mother help us with our homework. My favorite thing is to play with our dog, Buddy. If we have enough time, we will take him for a walk. I love my family. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇话题作文，介绍我的家庭。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I have……，There are……，there is……，My mother is……，my father sends us to……，If we have……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点评】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

25.每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多 原因。请以“What makes me a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。

What Makes Me a Good Friend?

【答案】 What Makes Me a Good Friend? I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. That's the most important reason that makes me so popular.

I'm always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moment's thought. Besides, I'm quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories to make my friends laugh. They say time spent with me is full of fun. I'm honest. I never tell lies. So I'm a friend worth trusting. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇命题作文，写作的话题为“What makes me a good friend?”，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 写作步骤：

一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。

1.我是一个容易相处的男生。我从不轻易生气。那是我受欢迎的最重要原因。easy to get along with；makes me so popular

2.我总是乐于助人。无论何时我的朋友遇到困难，我都会毫不犹豫帮助他们。 ready to help others；meet with trouble；give them a hand without even a moment's thought.

3.我很幽默，我总是能讲一些笑话让我的朋友发笑。humorous；tell some jokes；make my friends laugh

4.我从不撒谎，我是一个值得信任的朋友。never tell lies； a friend worth trusting 二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。

三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。

【点评】本题考查对本单元所学知识的综合运用，熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型，注意词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。

26.某英文杂志正在进行My space hero的征文活动，假如你是该杂志的热心读者，你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。请你根据下面有关景海鹏的资料写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，参加征文活动开头己给出，不计入总词数)。 1)．1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时； 2)．2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务： 3)．2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；

4)．2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。 My space hero

My space hero is JingHaipeng…… 【答案】My space hero

My space hero is Jing Haipeng．Jing was born in Yuncheng，Shanxi in 1966 Jing has done many exciting things．He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours．He has been to space three times．In September 2008，he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming．In June 2012 he took the Shenzhou-9 spaceship into space with LiuWang and LiuYang．On 17th October 2016,Jing took the Shenzhou-11 spaceship into space for the third time．He and Chen Dong stayed in space for thirty-three days． 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】1.开篇点明文章主旨，例如：我最喜爱的航空英雄，My favorite space hero is jing haipeng。

2.介绍一下你最喜欢的航天英雄的大致情况。例如他的出生，成长经历，如何当上了航天员等。Jing haipeng's hometown is...... . jing haipeng was born in 1966......

3.介绍一下景海鹏当航天员的经历，例如：jing haipeng has went to the space for three times...... 4.文末点题，说一下自己为什么喜欢景海鹏，例如：The reason why I like jing haipeng is..... 【点评】通读题目，理清题目要求，列出提纲，有自己的写作思路，在题目要求的范围之内可以适当发挥，让文章层次分明，有条理，有内容。

27.根据下列表格的提示, 写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文。（80词左右）文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息。开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点: 过去 1).旧房 2).河水肮脏 3).步行、骑自行车上班 4).道路狭窄(narrow). 5).居住条件（living conditions）差 现在 1).高楼 2).河水清澈(clean and clear). 3).乘公交车、小汽车上班 4).街道宽阔(wide)，干净整洁 5).生活越来越好，环境（environment）越来越舒适。 你的感想 ……（写两到三句） Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.…… 【答案】 Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many ring roads and the living conditions are comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it's still important to remember the past.

It tells that we should cherish the present life. 【考点】命题作文

【解析】【分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目是Changes in Our Hometown, 我们家乡的变化。因此写过去的事情要用一般过去时，写现在的情况要用一般现在时，要包括所有要点，最后必须要写自己的感想。

【点评】这篇作文很成功。首先开篇讲明变化，In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. 利用地非常好。一些短语词汇例如used to, living conditions, on foot, by bus, it's important to do sth. 让文章更加精彩。

28.下表是希望工程在2006年西部某一省区所取得的成就。请你根据表中所给的信息写一篇题为“Project Hope”的短文，字数在50—60字左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入词数。要求行文连贯、通顺、正确，语言表达清楚。 What Project Hope has done in a province in 2006 Money Project Hope has raised Students it has helped Schools it has built Books it has bought Clothes it has given People who have taken part Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money —28,593,346 yuan. 【答案】 Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money —28,593,346 yuan. The money has helped 5,036 students. The money has been used to build 62 schools. We use the money to buy 3,452,141books.We have given 5,000 clothes to the poor people. So far,367,403 people have taken part in the Project Hope Activity. 【考点】命题作文

28,593,346 yuan 5036 62 3,452,141 5,000 367,403 【解析】【分析】本文是一篇命题作文，要求考生就希望工程在2006年西部某一省区所取得的成就，写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读表格里的内容，需要注意语态，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【点评】本文要点齐全，语言简洁得体，表达准确到位，语言地道。在文中使用了一些口语化的简单句，生动丰富容易懂易接受。